Cracks

Dec. 25th, 2011 09:45 pm
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Title: Cracks
Rating: PG.
Summary: She thought about leaving.
Date: Summer 1980.
Notes: none.


She would leave him if she could.

In the long hot days of the summer after everything, Fatimah imagined leaving. She hated California summers at the best of times, heat rising from asphalt in shimmering waves; this summer, the worst of times, it burned the happiness from her life entirely. She dreamed of running, fleeing over the cracked sidewalks to somewhere cool and hidden.

Farid was silent, miserable, melting in the sun. Her children fled to the shadows for what little shelter they could get. She grew more miserable by the second.

She thought about leaving, every day.

She couldn't.

Date: 2012-01-02 04:19 pm (UTC)
isana: (Default)
From: [personal profile] isana
This is such a good way to show how trapped Fatimah feels, using the heat as a parallel.

Date: 2012-05-05 08:02 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] dark_kana
It feels as if she is so lonely and trapped... Poor her. I wish she could somehow escape.

Date: 2012-05-07 11:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bookblather
She is, and she can't; she has no monetary support. At least this is the worst it gets, for her.

Thank you.

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